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Thursday, March 30, 2017

Kitty Kitty Kitsune

Kitsune
Their bushy three tails flapping to the wind.
Their eyes like deep blue pools.
Their ears like soft petals.
Their fur as soft as a blanket.
They live in a hollow tree full of their favorite juicy  food birds and bunnies!
In that uneven hollow tree where they live it is wet and damp and filled with soft bedding of moss prrrrrfect. In the day their sport is stealing crummy delightful food out of a humungus! Manshion.   Strawberries, blackberries and anything juicy you can name.
They steal till days end !
I was learning to a piece of descriptive writing about a kitsune. ( A kitsune is a cat with three tails ) I think I used a lot of adjectives I need to use more onomatopoeia.


Monday, March 27, 2017

beach clean up



Last week On friday Our whole school Did a beach clean up there was all sorts of yucky  trash And to be honest I was not surprised here is a photo. I saw lots of cigarette butts and Astin, Ava, Lily, Freya and I found three hundred and seventy one.  I really enjoyed it but next time I hope there is less rubbish.

Wednesday, March 22, 2017

The moa DNA



I was learning about the moa and how they are trying to bring it back to life. I wanted to make it interesting so I hope you enjoy!

Thursday, March 9, 2017

Terrific Tasty Tangelo

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Tasty Tangelo


Tuesday 21st  February  2017


The tasty orange and yellow twisted together Tangelo was an oval shape that was as bumpy as a gravel road. As I peeled the rough skin it made a crunch noise. Once it was peeled it was a orange with white  lines between the segments.I sunk my teeth into the rubbery flesh and what I saw inside was lots and lots piled on top of each other where se through little beads of juice! Sqwish!
as I bite into the beads of flavor juice dribbles down my chin  all of my tastebuds scream TASTY! And I agree.
I was learning to do a descriptive piece of writing  about a delicious tangelo that my teacher brought in. I was working on similes and adjectives.I think I did well with similes. I think I need to work on Onomatopoeia.