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Tuesday, February 21, 2017

I Really Remember

Image result for tree png cartoonTuesday 7th February

I Remember...

Laying in the grass under the shelter of an oak tree.
The fat leaves of the oak tree tickled my face.
I looked up to see the candy floss  shaped clouds; they looked like they were swaying to the beat of the wind.
My cat came up and sat on my chest ,she was warm but  her eyes were wild.
I brushed a tiny ant off my face; its little  feet clambering onto my hand.
I put my hand  on the grass and it scampered off.
That was my summer.

I was learning to  write a piece of descriptive writing and to notice how the structure works.I had to use a lot of adjectives and similes to make it exciting. The first line was what you are doing , the second line was some descriptive writing based on what you were doing   and the last part was  that was my  summer. I think I put lots of descriptive words. What I could do better next time is use  more similes.